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beleester's avatar

One thing that kind of cuts against this reading is that the "utopia" part of Omelas is described much more vaguely than the dark secret. The first half of the story is basically "it's really nice, in the ways you think would be really nice. It's probably vaguely pastoral, but if you think that a pastoral setting would be boring or primitive, go ahead and imagine they have fusion power and trains or whatever. If utopia doesn't seem sexy enough, add an orgy." It has almost no specifics, just an invitation to picture whatever we think would be nice. There's flute music and horses, I guess.

On the other hand, the description of the child is unflinchingly precise. There is a child locked in a tiny broom closet in the basement, starving, living in its own excrement, feebleminded from neglect and isolation, pleading and screaming to be let out. The story tells us exactly how the child is abused and how it impacts the people of Omelas. That's why Omelas-with-a-dark-secret seems so much more real and believable than Omelas. Not because the cruelty gives it meaning or whatever, simply because the description is vivid and specific in a way that the first half of the story is not.

So if Le Guin is asking "why do we have so much trouble believing in a utopia?", my answer is "because you didn't give me anything to believe in." Asking me to imagine nice things isn't the same thing as worldbuilding.

Imagine this story had flipped the tone around, depicting Omelas in vivid detail and then following it up with "But you wouldn't believe in this utopia unless it had a dark secret, so I guess you should imagine it's powered by a tortured child or something." I probably would have had the opposite reaction - it would have seemed like something pointlessly tacked on to a perfectly nice fantasy city.

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"Fundamentally, The Ones Who Walk Away From Omelas is a story about fiction. The narrator is desperate to convince, but knows that whatever they say the reader will find the utopia implausible. Surely the people of Omelas are goody-two-shoes, they think. Shallow because they have no pain and injustice to endure. The revelry is empty, the beauty a facade."

I think this is a super weird sentiment. Reading the story I didn't think "oh man, a utopia, how unrealistic!" I just took it in stride that there was this cool utopia. I didn't have to be convinced. I don't think many other readers did either? You just imagine your ideal society. And then they tell you about the child thing and you're like OH NO IT'S NOT REALLY A UTOPIA and that's sort of the reversal.

I guess what I'm saying is I didn't experience any of the arc you're talking about.

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